Comments on: Visions of a Blind Man

By: badoodles.wordpress.com

badoodles.wordpress.com — Wed, 30 May 2007 07:21:24 +0000

ahh. dinudugo nostrils ko. balikan ko na lang to next time di ko ma-comprehend eh, pag di na ako lasing. he he..

By: Agent Grey

Agent Grey — Wed, 30 May 2007 01:46:32 +0000

Jhed,
Thanks. Once my literature prof said, grammar is not specifically needed for literary works… grammars are for proofreaders. LOL

By: Jhed

Jhed — Wed, 30 May 2007 01:22:44 +0000

Impressive. Medyo may ilang grammatical errors, pero that can be polished. Nonetheless, maganda ang pagkakasulat.

Ang eerie nung story. Buhay ang feeling pero patay ang katawan. Eek.

By: Agent Grey

Agent Grey — Tue, 29 May 2007 14:30:02 +0000

Mikee,
Thanks. It’s actually the same with creative writing, what you only need is urge. It will come out naturally so don’t force it.

That is… if the urge you’re thinking is different from the urge I’m saying.

By: mikee

mikee — Tue, 29 May 2007 10:59:21 +0000

i wish i could also write that would somehow resemble yours. i’m really not into creative writing, and i wouldn’t dare take that blasted subject just to learn to write “creatively. i write the way i hear it inside my head.

very nice.

By: Agent Grey

Agent Grey — Tue, 29 May 2007 03:19:56 +0000

utakGAGO,
Thanks! Syempre dapat medyo seryoso naman dito.

marco,
Yikes, don’t worry I still say prayers at night. You write better than me, you can do that too!

YNA,
WOW! Thanks… I rarely write literary pieces and you’re lucky to read one of them, only that, this one is creepy.

By: YNA

YNA — Mon, 28 May 2007 12:53:46 +0000

I agree with utakGAGO! This is…wow. I actually tell you that I could feel the words sipping to my system.

And another thing, this is unexpected. This is the first literary work that I’ve read from you. And it is…wow.

By: marco

marco — Mon, 28 May 2007 08:51:46 +0000

Like a nightmare. Feeling helpless and restrained yet very much aware of every little change in the immediate environ. These are the sorts of moments when you say your sorrys and whisper, even in your own head, a prayer. A cry for help perhaps. It can happen again.

So say pray’rs before going to bed. Hehe. Be careful what you write about, you might end up summoning stuffs, haha.

Still wish i can write something with the label ‘literary’. keep writing

By: utakGAGO

utakGAGO — Mon, 28 May 2007 05:16:34 +0000

akala ko comedy siya. yung tipong – BAT WALA AKONG MAKITA!?! yun pala, brownout lang pala.

nyahaha!

niiiice. medyo usual yung plot pero, henyo ang pagkakasulat. astig!!